by Baby Rainbow
Great poem well done! keep writing xxxxxxxxxxx |
by Darien
I really liked your rhyme schemes, they are such a throw off, but that makes it really neat. This was definitely a darkened poem and you really created some vivid images from this one. |
This is interesting... I cannot think of what to comment. Usually I critize people and tell them what to do to make it better... but for you I cannot think of anything! Well I guess I might as well tell you what I liked about it ;) |
by Kaila
I thought this poem was very outstanding! You did an incredible job! nicely done! |