by XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX Mar 22, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
I can't stand to see you hurt, |
by Jochsey
That was a good poem. Just a suggestestion, every 4 lines slit it into stanzas, it just makes it easier to read. Other then that it was really nice to read. |
by Apple
A friend of mine died a couple of days ago...and this poem...sadly, i wish we didn't have this in common |
by Baby Rainbow
Awww honey this is great talent here, good poem and well done, keep it up xxxx |
by kimara4955
This is as beav said a very sad but sweet poem, your special friend is lucky to have met you and shared happy memories as to me its hard to find a special friend, i written a poem for my best frined if you would read it please its called forgive me brother, i think you are a talnted writter and have alot of feelings and emotions to share in your poem very well written and take care. xx |
by beav
This is very sad and sweet. this person is lucky to have you as a friend. i think this is well written. this is a very good poem. good job. |