I won't forget you...

by XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX   Mar 22, 2007


I can't stand to see you hurt,
Please try not to cry,
Because these are the last moments,
Before we have to say goodbye.
You're one of the best people,
Who doesn't deserve this shit,
You've got such a big heart,
That your life just doesn't fit.
If I ever had a choice,
I'd take it all away,
You'd never see pain again,
Never live through a bad day.
You'd never take another hit,
Or be pushed into a wall,
Never be mistreated,
Or suffer another fall.
You wouldn't be left in sadness,
You'd never have to leave your friends,
Your life wouldn't be falling apart,
Coming loose at all the ends.
If I had a say,
In the way your life went down,
You'd have all you ever wanted,
And you'd get to stick around.
We'll all miss you so much,
I wish I had the words to say,
The right thing to let you know,
You're cared for in every way.
So please don't forget me,
Cause I'll never forget you,
You'll be a special friend,
Whatever we go through.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jochsey

    That was a good poem. Just a suggestestion, every 4 lines slit it into stanzas, it just makes it easier to read. Other then that it was really nice to read.

    5/5 Jochsey

  • 17 years ago

    by Apple

    A friend of mine died a couple of days ago...and this poem...sadly, i wish we didn't have this in common

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww honey this is great talent here, good poem and well done, keep it up xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by kimara4955

    This is as beav said a very sad but sweet poem, your special friend is lucky to have met you and shared happy memories as to me its hard to find a special friend, i written a poem for my best frined if you would read it please its called forgive me brother, i think you are a talnted writter and have alot of feelings and emotions to share in your poem very well written and take care. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by beav

    This is very sad and sweet. this person is lucky to have you as a friend. i think this is well written. this is a very good poem. good job.

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