This is very sad and sweet. this person is lucky to have you as a friend. i think this is well written. this is a very good poem. good job.

This is as beav said a very sad but sweet poem, your special friend is lucky to have met you and shared happy memories as to me its hard to find a special friend, i written a poem for my best frined if you would read it please its called forgive me brother, i think you are a talnted writter and have alot of feelings and emotions to share in your poem very well written and take care. xx

Awww honey this is great talent here, good poem and well done, keep it up xxxx

A friend of mine died a couple of days ago...and this poem...sadly, i wish we didn't have this in common

That was a good poem. Just a suggestestion, every 4 lines slit it into stanzas, it just makes it easier to read. Other then that it was really nice to read.

5/5 Jochsey