Very heartfelt poem, love can be so complex at times.The best i liked is your expression of caring towards the girl even after she left, that speaks tons of true affection.

I saw that you had written a part 5 and i was compelled to read it! (although i had to go back and read the first one again b/c i couldn't remember what it was about lol)... anyways, anothering amazing poem by goran i must say, i love this ongoing poem you have, it's so unique, and i love this poem b/c it's so heartbroken and wondering why he didn't listen... you know the way to a girl's heart through your writings! great job to my most admired poet on here 5/5

take care to you too.

Goran, this was just brilliant. Just as amazing as the other 4 parts. I don't even know what to say. There's gonna be a 6th part right?! Cos this just can't finish here! ;P Keep writing!!
Love,

` Liz

Woooooo nice deep and the title wooo dude nice poem 5/5

Wow I really like this poem. There is definatly emotion in it. I haven't read the other parts though lol probably should have read them first. Good work though! 5/5

That was beautiful, its so smooth, and so sad, you can really hear the poem in your mind, 5/5
gabriella

Wow. i loved this. i saw you wrote a new part and i thought i had to read it. nicely written. love is too complicated. but fun. =] 5/5.

Honest and heartwrenching, another great poem in this series although I don't know how many you intend on doing but after a while just be careful not to force meaning or use too much repitition which can be hard since there are four before this. Excellent work though! 5/5

~jas~

Wow this is sad...I loved how you want to be with her but are so angry at the guy who was with her begging him to be with her...nice job! 5/5

I really liked this poem... nice one

Nicely done. It is like reading a soap opera but your writing is so touching and full of emotion. Nice job!

Wow that was so good.

OMG THAT IS SO SWEET!!!!!!!!!!! i wish there was more of YOU out there!

I know I commented this before, but it is the simplest way to contact you. I just saw that you have a new book out. Where could I get it? The next time I go to Barnes and Nobles I'm going to look for Faded Love? I think that's what it is called. I want to know what are in the books. For than just saying what type they are. Are they what you post here?

How do you get them posted? What agencies?

Please take the time to answer my questions.

Thnks you.

That was a twist lol didnt know it would end like that. But overall they were really good, pretty sad but good. 5/5 Keep it up!

The poem was terribly sad, yet beautiful all the same. I am very pleased with the fact that you decided to write a part 5 & I hope to see a part 6 soon.. =] The flow was flawless, the emotions were strong, and overall, it was amazing! =] 5/5 Keep writing!

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Kitty you can contact me through my email (privite message) lol....... i love to answer your questions.lol tnx

Whao..All five poems are amazing, I waited to read all of them before commenting because I just felt compelled to read the next one.I didn't expect what happened in the 5th one, but it just shows what love is in our lives.
These poems where wonderfully penned, each where bursting with emotion.
Well done!

xox Elaine

Wow this one is amazing.. and so sad.. I really liked how it gave a complete turn of events, and I really loved how you yet again refered to the first poem. Its really sad that even though this guy loves the girl he wants the other one to be with her because he knows that thats when she would be the most happiest. Wonderful write. congrats.

Hey Goran your on my favs lol Very nice Poem! I give you my two thumbs up !!