by Santana Mar 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I look through the dry part of a window and out into the raindrops that smash against the concrete. I watch as you walk saturated along the footpath of change. Raindrops morph into tears as the reality of your departure from my life begins to settle into my brain. I realize I haven't said anything to make you stay. Something awakens in my legs and my heart that lead me out the door and into the rain, the water feels like little needles pricking at my skin as i so fragile and weakly grab your hand and confront you. The strength that is activated becomes very aware in your eyes and I begin to push you yelling at you "you think that its OK to come into my home and leave me shattered like you just did?"...you stand bewildered at my newly found anger and animosity towards you "answer me!!!!" but you are a coward in my eyes, with no remorse for the things you do, it was love at first but now has become pity. You stand so still now knowing that you have hurt me beyond any apology. all that comes out of your mouth is "I'm Sorry". I understand that you may have fallen in love with a knew person and that love is unstoppable but nothing could stop what comes out of this mouth "What you haven't understood yet is that your girl that you supposedly love and cherish and are willing to give me up for is my best friend and that love you think is love is just a newly found cheery to pop. so when you go to her with your love and your passion do not come trampling in my garden cause Havier just planted knew roses" The look on his face was enough to dry the tears away, and as I walked away a smile with so much satisfaction began to appear upon my face and for some reason the rain stopped. And although that Bas***d hurt me he made me knew woman. |
by N.Lee
This is a good poem... you can tell that you took a great amount of emotions to write it. keep up the "good" work |