Now this is one i get...i absolutely loved it...it kind've reminds me of a bridled spirit...the bridle being a person...i really think it's a good poem...
Jonda Beth

Haha. I agree with Jonda, I GET IT. its an unique way to tackle such a overused topic. I need to read more of your work. I need this type of inspiration. I want to write in a deeper more abstract way.