Moment

by David   Mar 22, 2007


Failing is the moment when I cloak how I feel.

Over by the moment when my heart you will steal.

Ready for the moment when we discover each others eyes.

Eager for the moment when we unite such consequential ties.

Vital is the moment, a time of loving rapture and adoring call.

Every moment counts for a million more when,

Realising this moment is not a moment at all.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Many thanks for the comment! Nice poem btw!

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow, very wonderfully written my friend. as always. Keep up the awesome work 5/5
    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Great write!!
    So much emotion, and you choice of wording was brilliant, i thoroughly enjoyed this poem, i'll be sure to read more of your work :)
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is sooo sweet!
    I loved this, I thought it was beautifully written.
    The flow was good all throughout the poem and I thought the wording was fantastic.

  • 17 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    This is pretty great!!!!!! thanks for the comment!!! u rock! :)
    amanda

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