Comments : Moment

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    Hey David

    This is a really good poem. 5/5 as always.

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    This was a really great poem.
    Excellently written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    I like the words you chose.
    Very beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    This is pretty great!!!!!! thanks for the comment!!! u rock! :)
    amanda

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is sooo sweet!
    I loved this, I thought it was beautifully written.
    The flow was good all throughout the poem and I thought the wording was fantastic.

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Great write!!
    So much emotion, and you choice of wording was brilliant, i thoroughly enjoyed this poem, i'll be sure to read more of your work :)
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow, very wonderfully written my friend. as always. Keep up the awesome work 5/5
    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Many thanks for the comment! Nice poem btw!