This is a good poem. well done, its a good talent you are showing so keep it up. hope you are ok. take kare xxxxx

THis is really great, but this would make a good chorus if you wrote it for a song or longer poem. I can see thats not really your style but it would be cool. Great job though.

This is a really good one, it shows so much emotion and it really is sweet but in such a sad way, if that makes sense...
5/5
- ali xxxx