One last time

by Miu   Mar 22, 2007


Blinded by tears.
I feel you walking away.
Everything is black,
Even the sun shining above me,
Fades as dropping from the sky.
Is this the end?
Or this is where all begins again?
I feel the silence softly killing me.
One last breath to take,
One last tear to fall.
As i lay to sleep.
Never waking up to feel,
One last time i'll try to smile.

Before ending the last sentence i heard about friends death... This is to him. R.I.P Kaur 30.08.06

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  • 16 years ago

    by adriaan

    Hey, I love this one! Especially the last line...thanks for commenting mine too :)

  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    This is so touching and moving, the little note at the end nearly made me cry and gave the whole piece another meaning, awesome, heartbreaking stuff...
    5/5
    - ali xxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    This is great. Must be well written by you!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    This is a great poem! Such a heartfelt poem. Loved it. 5/5

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