I really liked it. I thought the beginning was good, a little weak, but here,
"They stand out like Hymns
Like tubular bells.."
Is where I started to get pulled in. I love your symbolism, and the flow of the poem really worked for you. Your words were lyrical, and lovely, and I liked how you incorporated little cliche lines into the piece. I really enjoyed it

Thanks Michelle, I road it to a female friend as a thanks. I am glad you like it. I have been reading you poems, and there are really god, you may be young woman but an old spirit. I am glad you enjoyed it, though it may be a little cliched.

That is really good.. Im actually deaf myself... that a good poem...

Thanks Victoria ;-)
It were a comment to another who road to me, and I chose to write the answer with a poem.
But nice that you liked it, and took the time to comment it, I hope that you will have a nice day.