Not the game

by Drusus Bathory   Mar 22, 2007


A monopoly of hate
A street I've seen before
I wonder lonely slowly tapping
Looking for a door

This bright light city dazzled me
It doesn't anymore

I'm almost out of cash
My trail at an end
Looks like I made a bad move
I'm off to jail my friend

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh wow very original! you did an excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Yeah the middle para sucked! two lines just broke the whole thing up.

    but i liked the rest. 5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    The structure of this one is perplexing. The lines in the middle leave me to wonder if it is finished.

    {4/5}

    [PymgyPuff]

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Monopoly as a metaphor, interesting. Not sure what else to say as you didn't want comments (or you won't listen to them) and I don't want to waste my breath...

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