Monopoly as a metaphor, interesting. Not sure what else to say as you didn't want comments (or you won't listen to them) and I don't want to waste my breath...

The structure of this one is perplexing. The lines in the middle leave me to wonder if it is finished.

{4/5}

[PymgyPuff]

Yeah the middle para sucked! two lines just broke the whole thing up.

but i liked the rest. 5/5 David

Oh wow very original! you did an excellent job!