Eternal Bliss (Collab)

by Romantic Lover   Mar 22, 2007


**Collab with So Sick of Tears**

Staring out to sea
Feelings arms circle my waist
Stars shimmering softly
With you I've found my place

My fears I soon forget
While locked in your warm embrace
I feel a sudden chill
And yet my heart begins to race

Smiling to myself
Knowing your love is pure
Whilst in your arms
Can't help but feel secure

I slowly turn around
Wind blowing in my hair
Passions begin to ignite
As we lock in a stare

Gazing into your eyes
My heart begins to melt
Nothing can ever compare
To the love, I have felt

Our lips begin to tremble
As they long to unite
A perfect romantic setting
On this warm summers night

Breeze blowing gently
Want to stay forever here
Locked in your warm embrace
My love for you sincere

This moment we'll always treasure
And fate will guide us through
Just know in your heart
I'm forever devoted to you.

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So sick of Tears - I had a great time working on this with you!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I loved this poem. I have also did a collab with Jenni. She's a beautiful writer to do a collab with. This expressed so much within it. You two honestly worked so well together to create an awsome poem. 5/5 from me definitly. Well deserving. ~Mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom K

    Excellent poem.. :) You know me I am all about the love poems.. this one was very good, umm ummm makes you want to go on a cruise! God! Let me clear my thoughts! ~LOL~
    thank you darlin,
    tom

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    Such beautiful love poem , great job both of you.A very enjoyable read.

  • 17 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Great job on this you both did a really good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    The two of you did an amazing job on this poem. Really beautiful!

    This moment we'll always treasure
    And fate will guide us through
    Just know in your heart
    I'm forever devoted to you.

    Loved this stanza. I love the forever kind of love. Great job!
    Take Care Cindy