by Kurt Mar 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
"You caught me off guard" |
by Ambar
Great poem, know the feeling- can totally relate 5/5 |
Great poem i really liked it.. It had good flow and rhymed really well. its also very easy to relate to.. it had one mistake that i seen and it was not that big of a deal either. |
by Teria
Memories, oh memories. Loll. |
I love the poem and the meaning behind it, we're all forced to make choices in life and sometimes it's hard. I think if you used some punctuation in key points in your poems that they would appear much better. Just write your words as you would say them, if your gunna have a little pause in between words then toss a comma in. The poem was still great and very few things need to be changed. excellent job 5/5 |
by Brook
This is really good. I really liked this. The rhyming was good, and its sweet yet sad. |