Hmm, Ok well I liked the poem, don't take me wrong. I get the thought and what you were trying to get at and its a really meaningful point. I can connect to it. Except for I'm sort of confused, you see usually when you say yes, that means Yes..I love you? Or yes...what? That's why I'm sort of confused. I think it kinda doesn't connect with the first part. Apart from that the rhymes and the topic is all beautiful. |
by Jenni Marie
I enjoyed this, I thought it was filled with emotion and depth behind the words. |
by isabel
I really loved this poem...you're an excellent writer... |
by Jessy
Thats good |
by Broken
It was really good. |
by Brook
This is really good. I really liked this. The rhyming was good, and its sweet yet sad. |
I love the poem and the meaning behind it, we're all forced to make choices in life and sometimes it's hard. I think if you used some punctuation in key points in your poems that they would appear much better. Just write your words as you would say them, if your gunna have a little pause in between words then toss a comma in. The poem was still great and very few things need to be changed. excellent job 5/5 |
by Teria
Memories, oh memories. Loll. |
Great poem i really liked it.. It had good flow and rhymed really well. its also very easy to relate to.. it had one mistake that i seen and it was not that big of a deal either. |
by Ambar
Great poem, know the feeling- can totally relate 5/5 |