by becca Mar 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Ive clung on so hard, |
by carl
Brilliant poem well done , excellent emotion for a 15 year old. keep it up , looking forward to a poem you write when you are in love. carlos |
by MaSkEdSoUl
This was a pretty good poem, the flow was great and the repetition was very very good.Though, I think you should put it in stanzas' it would give it more structure. But overall very well written and many can relate. Keep up the good work!! 5/5 |
I lovee lovee lovee it |
by isabel
Absolutely wonderful... |
by Caz
Wow... I Can Really Relate.. |