Nightmare of Reality

Wow. your wording made this poem so strong.

"my sobs echo..." great line!!!

5/5.

Ah, see this one has the angry tone. You speak of tortue, and in everyone's mind, that relates to pain. Nightmares as well give off a really dark aura. A much better effort in this poem. A few things I would change, but that's my opinion, if you like it the way it is, that's fine. Awesome job!

Damn I was just going to quote that line, well in the typical English way I shall simply say,

"what she said".

Very interesting,
Drusus

Such a metaphorical method to describe such a topic. I expeccially enjoyed "the infestation of torment", due to the physical description given to a feeling.

{5/5}

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