Such a metaphorical method to describe such a topic. I expeccially enjoyed "the infestation of torment", due to the physical description given to a feeling.

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[PygmyPuff]

Damn I was just going to quote that line, well in the typical English way I shall simply say,

"what she said".

Very interesting,
Drusus

Ah, see this one has the angry tone. You speak of tortue, and in everyone's mind, that relates to pain. Nightmares as well give off a really dark aura. A much better effort in this poem. A few things I would change, but that's my opinion, if you like it the way it is, that's fine. Awesome job!

Wow. your wording made this poem so strong.

"my sobs echo..." great line!!!

5/5.