Intense {{acrostic based}}
by .K.i.T.t.Y. Mar 22, 2007
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It's an acrostic to an extent. you'll notice when it drops the form. |
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17 years ago
by Zeus
Wow i loved it. it all went together. And just as this poem. It was intense
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17 years ago
by Espoirfailed
I liked this "hybrid" poem. i think the use of two styles added a sense of confusion which can be either good or bad. the words you used were clever and this poem flowed well, it was sweet and beautiful.
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17 years ago
by Bryan
Well its different from what i usually see in acrostic poems, but i like to see people mix the styles and you did excellent, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!
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17 years ago
by StefQ
Amazing use of vocabulary, it's just brilliant...
no much other words for it except : EXCELLENT JOB !! keep writing !
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17 years ago
I liked it, but I was a bit confused with the ending stanza, the bsbi c ... what are those supposed to stand for? Anyways, on an emotional side, I give this a 5/5 .. (:
