Wow! soo powerful ! loved the way you ended it! well done!

Wow! awsome poem, really well written and quite different to most other ana poems!
Your rhyming is really good, and quite unique in most stanzas too!
I really like the last stanza, even though the meter is different to the others it ends it really forcefully.
5/5
Great work
Steph

Wow this is a powerful poem
the rhyming and flow was amazing as well
this work has got it all

Wow....powerful poem, it had an amazing flow, I loved the ending....
5/5