When

by ~*SugarCube*~   Mar 22, 2007


When I felt like nobody cared.
you stuck by my side.
You made me feel like I didn't have to hide.

When I'm scared you hold me in your arms.
You keep me away from harm.

When my heart was broken
You were there to pick up the pieces
and put them back together.

When everyone else left me.
You didn't get up and flee.

When I'm sad you cheer me up
and make me glad.

Before I met you I was a mess.
When I found you, I knew I was blessed.

You changed my life for the good.
I no longer think about my messed up childhood.

You helped me forget about my past.
Every time I'm with you I have a blast.

I asked you if you'd ever leave me.
You told me never.
It's me and you forever.

You taught me how to love.
It's like your angel sent to me from above.

*Chelsea*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Yet another great one, i felt like that for a person too, and i totally believe she s n angel that was sent from above, great job
    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    I liked how you used "when" over and over again. It made the poem stronger, I think. Great job.
    [tragic]

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Aww..this poem was really sweet it was simple and sweet....its like my 3 s its simple sweet and short... and u hav all 3 good job =)

  • 17 years ago

    by So Beautifully Broken

    Really good .i gave you 5 , keep up the great work .

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Very well written. You did a great job on this poem. I loved the emotion and it was really sweet. Keep it up 5/5