Comments : When

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber

    You have some really good poems as well, thanks for the comment on mine. I definately give you 5/5 on all of yours, you are a really good writer.
    ~Christi

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    Cute! i give you a 5/5 i like the rhyming pattern.. different! different is good! very good! ^.^ good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so cute.
    The rhyme scheme threw me off at times, but apart from that I think you did a wonderful job with this, it made me all smiley =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Very well written. You did a great job on this poem. I loved the emotion and it was really sweet. Keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by So Beautifully Broken

    Really good .i gave you 5 , keep up the great work .

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Aww..this poem was really sweet it was simple and sweet....its like my 3 s its simple sweet and short... and u hav all 3 good job =)

  • 17 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    I liked how you used "when" over and over again. It made the poem stronger, I think. Great job.
    [tragic]

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Yet another great one, i felt like that for a person too, and i totally believe she s n angel that was sent from above, great job
    keep it up