Omgaw i luv it!!! everyone's luv poems always connect to my luv life!! its weird

Wow. this one really speaks out to me. it kinda scares me in a way cuz i can relate but i don't want to end up like the end of this poem. but its like a reality check. but this is a great poem and its really deep. its really meaningful. please keep up the good work.

Well done, very good. like the idea of the repeating line!
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I really liked the flow of this and the layout. Despite that it's a little cliché, it was nicely done and I could defintely see the images you were holding for the reader to see. Great Job.

Aww... So sweetly written.. Loved it.. So sad but still so wonderful..
>keep it up!

OMG!!! Girl this is sooooo good its sad tho but its sooo good...