Walking in the rain

by xo kisses xo   Mar 22, 2007


Walking in the rain
no-one can see her tears
the rain falling on her
eraces all her fears

walking in the rain
you're the one she's missing
tears flow with the rain
for you, she's only wishing

you never see the tears that fall
while shes walking in the rain
the rain covers the tears
but it doesn't cover the pain

through all the pain and tears
never did you know
the day the tears began to fall
was the day you let her go

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  • 17 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    =..( So sad but i love it...

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Aww.. so sad but so sweet and beautiful as well.. Loved it.. 5/5 I loved it how you repeated that Walking in the rain thingy.. :)

    Great job!

    Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by AngelWithTheBrokenWings

    I really like this poem. good work!!
    ~emS~

  • 17 years ago

    by Viola

    Aww i love this. it's really nice the way it expresses your feelings. lots of love <3

  • 17 years ago

    by stefanie

    I can really feel the emotion coming out from this poem. i can relate to some of it. great job. you have a way with words. thank you for the comment.

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