Some random name that i can't think of right now

by Vodka   Mar 22, 2007


How can you do it?
How can you forget
everything we went through,
and not have a fit?
I can't just forget
how I almost lost my wit.

It was gone in a flash,
like everything disappeared.
When we were together,
there was nothing that I feared.

But now that you left,
you took something else with it.
There's nothing left that I can do.
I can't ignore it. I know its true.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Like everything disappeared
    ^ I'd try not to use "like" in a poem.

    And the last stanza, the first two lines sounds weird. The grammar is a little messed up.

    Over all it was pretty good. And Im sorry that this is what you feel.

More Poems By Vodka