thanks for comenting i really apretiate it yeah my grandpa was like my everything!!!
Read my other poems

this is an awesome expression of emotion... very well done!

Is there a reason you double submitted it rather than just editing it? I couldn't find any major differences in the poem itself, just wondering if I'm missing something.

Again, it's an excellent poem... and I'm sorry for your loss...

I have a death in my family too. If I miss my grandpa, I listen to the song My Immortal.

ow, i know how you feel sweetie, exactly how u feel :( I'm so sorry

i have 2 poems about him, if u'd like to read them...I'd appreciate it... "please grandpa" and "June 21, 1999"

my grandpa is diagnosed with prostate cancer and they said they got it out but it wasnt and he has it again and now he has bone cancer...which u cant cure and now he is not eating and its all cus my grandma passed away 4yrs ago and he thinks its his turn so i defiently know how you feel and i am sorry!! love much brit