Opened Gates

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Mar 22, 2007


A poem,
The passage way
To one's heart.

Every emotion
Strokes the paper,
Painted with care.

Each word,
Each line,
Done with heart.

Every mark
Left by the pen
Has purpose.

No matter
The situation,
Emotion shows.

To write,
Is my escape,
My love.

Paradise's gates,
Have open to me,
Embracing my warmly.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Touche. Nicely said. I could almost feel a lot of emotion here, but not as much as I'd like. However, I did like your description of a poem for a poet, so nicely done there.
    The beginning stanza was so true; nicely said.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    The words usage is amazing in this piece, and the form is great.
    My favorite lines are:
    -Every mark
    Left by the pen
    Has purpose.

    No matter
    The situation,
    Emotion shows.-

    Excellently written poem, deserves 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Hmm this is an interesting poem..i never really thought as writing lik this....5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I love this poem! I think you did an incredible job! Way to go! I'm now adding you to my favorites I just love your work!

  • 17 years ago

    by LOVEcanHEALorKILL

    Cool poem. U are a good poet.

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