Comments : Opened Gates

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem by my favorite poet. keep up the nice work like always.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    I liked this poem alot.
    Your such a good writer.
    5/5
    take care!

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by LOVEcanHEALorKILL

    Cool poem. U are a good poet.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I love this poem! I think you did an incredible job! Way to go! I'm now adding you to my favorites I just love your work!

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Hmm this is an interesting poem..i never really thought as writing lik this....5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    The words usage is amazing in this piece, and the form is great.
    My favorite lines are:
    -Every mark
    Left by the pen
    Has purpose.

    No matter
    The situation,
    Emotion shows.-

    Excellently written poem, deserves 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Touche. Nicely said. I could almost feel a lot of emotion here, but not as much as I'd like. However, I did like your description of a poem for a poet, so nicely done there.
    The beginning stanza was so true; nicely said.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5