I really like this poem... i love how you put it together, and the rhymes, and the whole message (or... question...)
but i didn't really feel a rhythm to this poem... it was kina all over the place...
great job though, 5/5!

Once again another great poem.
I like this one alot.
People can relate to it.
good job.
5/5
take care!

~Chelsea

I liked this poem....it had a ver nice flow except the word ever got a little bit to repetitive other then that I think you did a wonderful job with this poem...

This poem was much better than the last one it had a lot of good questions and was very well written, great job
5/5

The ending was so strong. well done. i love poems that end so dramatically and purposely.

well done. 5/5 David

It was good and strong in the beginning, but towards the middle, it started to not rhyme and then started to rhyme again, which messed up the flow. and some of the lines were too long. but otherwise, nice poem.

I like how you used a number of questions. I, myself, have opted to ask questions in my writing. I find it works as a way to convey how you really feel inside.

I liked it. Nice work.

Another good one.
Not great because again in places your flow was off.
The lines were too long.
I think if you went through this poem & tried to improve it it could be excellent.

The ideas you have are great.
I love how its all questions and how theyre phrased.
Just try perfect it & itd be great.

=)

That was so good!!...i loved it.. 5/5 from me.. comment backkk haha

This one is really good too. The emtions are strong, and you raised some very good questions. I have no doubt in my mind that you deserve 5/5 for this poem