So sad. but extremely well penned!x

Excellent poem, you wrote with brutality and heartfelt pain and I liked how you began and ended with mention to the black diary. Great job and keep up the good work!

Perfect. its starts off the same way it ends...
it's just so well tied together.
yesh! its awesssomee. 5/5

Well done. i could read this with no trouble, the flow was excellent and the word choice was fantastic!

5/5 David

At first glance it felt like a block of writing which put me off put as I read I found it very good.

I loved how you repeated the begining at the end, really finished it off.
The flow was steady & the storey was touching.
It was a sad poem, but thats where alot of people get their inspiration.

Well done :]

*blinks back tears* this was abeautiful heartfelt piece. the story was dreadfully sad, but it kept me hooked. <3

Loved this poem. So many people can relate to this. Writting things in a diary is like telling someone your feelings but the difference is that your diary won't betray you like people can. Great job. Keep up the good work 5/5

Awe *tear* that is really great!!! i would give it a 10/10 but i can't so 5/5

xoxo kisses

Aww, that was so sad. This is the best poem I've read from you. It's so heartfelt, and kept me hooked from beginning to end.

Keep it up.

Awwww...this almost made me cry and once again..this is lik a poem tht ppl can relate too..i can relate..i had a diary tht mayb one day i would publish..but somehow it dissapeared..i would of called it the eyes of the depressed cuz i was sucidal..another great poem..u hav talent use it..

Very sad. but the poem is well worded and the flow is amazing.

BEAUTIFUL poem... Really an excellent piece of writing. It wasn't at all what I expected; great job. 5/5

[tragic]

...I cried with every line... You just described me in a once apon a time... 5/5

O.O wow super great poem good job. love your writing. keep it up.