How can this not have comments?
This is my fave type of poem and one i like to do a lot.
Simple rhymes and neat stanza's. They really get the point across =)
I loved this, just the right amount of emotion =)
5/5
*Gem*

''Are you smiling because you on your own''

I think you meant Because 'you're on your own.

I looove this, dunno if you've given it to him? If not you should so.
Beautiful flow was kept all throughout the puece.
On your next piece I would like to see less fillers though.
Apart from that, beeeautiful!!!

Wow! I love this poem and especially these lines.

When you look to the future
And smile at what you see
Are you smiling because you on your own
Or standing there with me?

You took all the feelings of loves wonder and managed to pen them so well. I often wonder these things myself about my love. Bravo on a beautifully written piece.

Dixie

I really love your poetry, you are so talented. And I love that you feel so strong about love and emotions. I'm like that to. 5/5 Im putting you on my favouritte authors list, you are really good.

"Take my heart" is a poem I have written that I think you could really relate to. Keep up the excellent writing.