I think this poem was great. Who ever downvoted it to a 1/5 is really jealous. I give it a 5/5 cuz I loved the way you described sadness. Wonderful way of expressing your feelings. Keep up the good work.

Your descriptions of sadness are excellent. I agreed with everything that you said. This was a very nicely penned poem. Good work.

5/5.

There was a lot of weird spelling mistakes in this poem, and you were sort of repetitive. The lines were kind of boring because of that. You started off a lot of lines with "It". You should use other words to describe 'sadness'

I liked the different ways you used to compare sadness and the way you contrasted the colours was excellent!!
5/5
*Gem*