Broken stars

by the lost mind   Mar 23, 2007


I lay under the broken stars
as i look up at mars
i see all the tears
all the fears
that is me
i wish i could never see
all the images of pain
all the tears like falling rain
it keep drowning me
the broken stars laying in the sea
the angles cry tonight
as another one lost the fight
the fight to live to try
he fell and died
the broken stars bleed tonight
turn off the light
see them cry
see them die
every tear i shied
i fear they are dead
i wish i was as they are
i wish i was so far

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    You are one amazing poet. the words were profound and the sentence were completely strong. well done David. take care

    -Sarah A.

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina McDowell

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  • 17 years ago

    by shantavia

    I love this peom too

  • 17 years ago

    by sara

    I love this poem keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Taz

    Omg that poem was really deep, i loved it, keep it up plzzzzzzz
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