This is a good poem. well done, its a good talent you are showing so keep it up. hope you are ok. take kare xxxxx

WOW, this poem WOWED me. thi si something that i know is deeper than the usual poem. i can tell you wrote this with so much feeling. I REALLY enjoyed it, i related with it in a way.......

Poet to Poet I must say you have very enlightening messages in your poetry and it amazes me as I read each line that i can form the story in my head. Wow cannot compate to what i wish i could say because you are a very very good writer. I'd love to read more of your work.

Very well put!!..simple at yet had so much meaning to it aswel..keep up the gr8 writes
tk care bree:D

Omg that poem was really deep, i loved it, keep it up plzzzzzzz
~Taz~

I love this poem keep it up

I love this peom too

Wow..... that was an amazing poem... hey sorry i havent been around much, i was really sick, but im back now and your poems are food as ever... visit my page too okay?

You are one amazing poet. the words were profound and the sentence were completely strong. well done David. take care

-Sarah A.