Had to let go

by ~*SugarCube*~   Mar 23, 2007


Running around on the playground with a smile on your face.
I was new there, I felt out of place.
You asked me what my name was.
I asked you yours.
I asked you to be my friend.
So many hours together we'd spend.
We'd have silly little fights over who wanted something the most.
We'd try to scare each other, act like we were ghosts.
We'd say we'd be best friends forever.
No one could come between us, not ever.
A few years later everything started to change.
You were acting a little strange.
You once called me almost every night.
I wouldn't get a call for months, something didn't seem right.
Every time I called, you said you had to go.
Every time you said you'd come over, you'd never show.
I tried to stay friends with you.
But you didn't want anything to do with me.
I saw you with your other friends.
I was the one you forgot exist.
How could this happen after being friends for so long?
What did I do wrong?
I fought as hard as I could
To win you back.
But there was nothing I could do.
Our friendship was through.

*Chelsea*

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    I can relate soo bad on this....i guess tht sometimes tht we need to let go of a really bad friendship...another 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    This is very nice. I loved the way u expressed your thoughts and feelings. I enjoyed reading this very much. Keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ellewen

    I liked it. You made a point. I can really understand where you are coming from on this for I have been through the same. This makes it even better because it relates to your audience. I really liked the beginning. But I was alittle confused wiht the end, and it was a bit overwhealming because you didn't use stanzas. The stanzas just help organize the readers thoughts and to keep up with what you are trying to say/ Other then that I realy enjoyed it. It seemed to be very deep. Always a plus. Keep it up! Thanks for the comment!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this as I thought there were a lot of depth and emotion behind the words.
    I thought the flow seemed a little off at times but apart from that it was a good write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Carmen

    Sounds just liek this friend of mine. she used to think she was so much better than me but now im more liked than her! lol.well, it was 5/5

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