I went through this in middle school. that whole transition from elementary to junior high changed it all. but it was worth it. it hurt like hell but it made me stronger. this is very well written and i love how you make your poems flow so easliy. great job

I went through this in middle school. that whole transition from elementary to junior high changed it all. but it was worth it. it hurt like hell but it made me stronger. this is very well written and i love how you make your poems flow so easliy. great job

I went through this in middle school. that whole transition from elementary to junior high changed it all. but it was worth it. it hurt like hell but it made me stronger. this is very well written and i love how you make your poems flow so easliy. great job

I went through this in middle school. that whole transition from elementary to junior high changed it all. but it was worth it. it hurt like hell but it made me stronger. this is very well written and i love how you make your poems flow so easliy. great job

Very good.. brava! ;) i loved every part but the last 3 lines... they werent as great as the rest of the poem.. 5/5

Sounds just liek this friend of mine. she used to think she was so much better than me but now im more liked than her! lol.well, it was 5/5

I liked this as I thought there were a lot of depth and emotion behind the words.
I thought the flow seemed a little off at times but apart from that it was a good write.

I liked it. You made a point. I can really understand where you are coming from on this for I have been through the same. This makes it even better because it relates to your audience. I really liked the beginning. But I was alittle confused wiht the end, and it was a bit overwhealming because you didn't use stanzas. The stanzas just help organize the readers thoughts and to keep up with what you are trying to say/ Other then that I realy enjoyed it. It seemed to be very deep. Always a plus. Keep it up! Thanks for the comment!

This is very nice. I loved the way u expressed your thoughts and feelings. I enjoyed reading this very much. Keep up the good work. 5/5

I can relate soo bad on this....i guess tht sometimes tht we need to let go of a really bad friendship...another 5/5