by Alesia Mar 23, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I paint pictures of you in my mind, |
by SheenaMarie
Beautiful write 5/5 |
Again a wonderful written poem, but the structure is off, break it into stanzas, it will flow much better and the strucutre will be better as well. Over all I loved your wording. |
by Sole
Wow. I really enjoyed reading through this poem. It was well written and the content was beautiful. I loved every second of it. |
by Debbie
Butterfly's = butterflies |
by Brittany C
Wonderful poem. I really liked it:) What girl dosn't want some of those things:) 5/5 |