Most people don't write poemz like this, but it was such a beautiful tribute, it flowed so smoothly and it was so nice, wow. 5/5
gabriella

Hmm... emo's. I really liked it. This was a nice poem to write. I have a lot of emo friends and i'm sorta emo. Well I guess you can't be sorta emo. I am emo. So obviously I enjoyed this poem. I could relate to it a lot. So great job! Oh i'm adding you to my favorites lol.

Keep writing!
Cayce

Good poem. The wording seems a little bit juvinile but it effectively portrays your message. Oh btw, helping a real emo puts your own sanity at risk. I have a few friends who occasionaly get very very depressed, i break down every time it happens. Sorry, i got a bit off topic. Good poem

This was a good poem it had a good flow, personally i am not an emo but i liked the idea of this poem, well done

Dude nice im from your club 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Nice write David, had a good flow and good structure to it. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Wonderful poem...though...it's not easy to stop being emo... sometimes ppl are just feeling too bad and they can't just stop it...anyway...the poem is great...keep on writing...

*isabel*

It is great that you are willing to listen and help others. You seem to have a good heart with true intensions. Maybe someday we will find you in the field doing some councelling work.

Keep up the good work, but most of all keep up the pure heart!

--Sher

This is very moving.... I wish I could write like this.

Ah, this was a great poem here. i have to say that it was really reaching for ones in trouble.

this is your best poem so far.

I feel that your poem...um...has no words that can describe it, at least none in the our language...i was very moved and you cannot know how moved i am, i loved it! it makes me look mediocre

-Polaris

Once again, nice poem David!! I really like this, it's about time somebody had a tribute to emos! All of that is very true too, I like how you worded this poem... keep up the great job hun! 5/5 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~

I loves this poem it true thts how we feel sumtimes and is good to have ppl like u tht care and i loved the flow and rhytim j3j3 GREAT JOB DUD3!!! 5/5 d3f!
=========== cynthia m.X]

I have a friend whos an emo and her dad died and she's so quiet about everything... she won't tell anyone anything... anyway beautiful poem 5/5 and so true

((A mini poem replying to yours ^^))
I'll put down the weapons
I'll give it a shot
All I can say is thank you
A life is saved

I love your poem, it spoke to me... Its deep 5/5

Sure this may sound wierd, But I love emo kids. They really make up the world. And Im glad someone else is there for them too. I love this poem. I havent read any others about emo kids. Its grreat.

You put up with so much
You hide from this life
Your only known treatment
Are cuts from a knife

This was my favourite stanza.... im loving this poem... thanks for the comment on my poem titled The Dance of Dreams. just a random quesiton here .... are you the fellow who is dating a lady named maisy?

anyway ... nice comment on my poem. i love the deepness and emotion to this poem.

Love ya friendly pal
Chan
-xx-

True, i conseder this as a lesson to all of us... as always you have done a brillent job. you are a very talented person and that should be the reason for you to be happier than everyone else cause not every person got that talent. keep it up dude.
as always a 5/5 cause u really deserve it.

Wow... finally someone who doesn't write about how emo kids are sissys or gay. I like that. thank you.

That was great and an interesting topic to write a poem off of and I like it...a lot. A poem that considers the others sides views. Really great job : ]]