Ur great writer and its realy touching

I loved your poem, it filled me with emotion. Great Job!

Mary

Hey david i really liked your peom. it was good it gave you a inside look into wat a emo feels. i liked it. 4/5

much love
xxxladiballaxxx

This is really nice, it rhymes nicely and i can tell you put a lot of thought into it. good job =]

Omg, that was so catchy, I loved the ending......so like deep and specially how it had the ..... dots so like..WOW...!!!
and wow emos must feel special that u wrote to them, and its so good, cause u've said it in a nice way...like, grow up, like if more then just cutting urself but you also said it in a way of, let me learn from you, I am here to help, basically representing you....but also others that can help them....[could be interpreted that way] I think alot of people can be moved by this, willing to let poeple understand them....
Such powerful messages,
Good work!
Hidden

Awwww i luv this poem its amazing, u have great talent and this poem is soooooo cool

5/5

David,

The word Emo...I did not know what it meant until I read about it a few days ago. Now I know what you are writing about. It is so sweet of you to take an interest in something so hard to comprehend for an outsider, but then...you are such a sweet boy!
Well done, David!!

5/5 from your dutch friend Ingrid

This didnt appeal to me just because i think emo is a trend BUT i did like the wording and the flow.
I didnt get bored with it because it was pretty good. just didnt like the content
xx
Taegan Emily

I just loved this! It was great to read something filled with hope and optimism for a change. I loved the flow, it was flawless.

"Yet don't act so rash
Don't turn, be their fool
Take a stand
Make your own set of life rules"
^your best stanza!

Well done *5/5*

Here's from me to you: I love your poetry!

XXXIngrid

I think its very kind, the way you reach out in this poem . Everyone needs a helping hand sometimes.Secretly harming oneself is not the answer ,opening up to someone like you just might be.....great message!

Great poem. Your message was clear and straight to the point. It;s nice to see someone take concern for emo's rather than ragging on them and making fun of them, and making false assumptions. i give. 5/5. :]

Nice poem, enjoyed reading it.
Best of luck.

I am emo. I am an emotional person which is what the word emo stands for. I listen to music classified as emo, and some lyrics I classify myself as emo. As much as I get mad when people talk about emos the wrong way, I do think this poem shows a caring person behind writing. Trend emos cut, real emos may or may not but I think mostly not. I am a real emo. I do not cut, I get in depressive moods, I do not think about suicide, but have a negative outlook sometimes. I don't wear the thick black make-up, but I cry too easily. If your poem wasn't with a thoughtful caring, wanna help voice, I'd be mad at how emos are steroeotyped. But since you really sound like you want to help trend emos, how could this poem be taken in a negative light?

I did really like this.
although i dont like the fact that is directed towards just emos.
mainly because not all people who cut are
"emo"
but i understand that you are trying to say that there are people for them to turn to.
5/5

Oh,wow this seriesly made me cry,you described how we emo's really feel,this is such a sweet poem.100/100

Shawty got them Apple Bottom jeans [jeans]
Boots with the fur [with the fur]
The whole club was looking at her.
Shawty hit the flo,
Next thing ya know
Shawty got low low low low low low low

I've already commented this poem. ... i L-O-V-E it lollolll anyway, love me.
Catch ya bud.
laterz nigga

This poem is touching and exciting all at once. Let's help those emos so they don't have to kill themselves! I loved the idea, rhymes and flow from begining to end. This is a subject many can relate to. Let's do something for the sake of emo, we shouldn't just stand and watch them as they cut their veins. A very nice piece 5/5

Awwwwwwwwww luv dis poem as much as all ur ovas dis poem tlkz 2 me so so much thnk u so much 4 it :):):):):):):):):):)

This is really good.. although im not a fan of labeling people. even if they call themselves that..

but the poem was very well expressed.. and most people do tend to be all sad and what not and feel cutting is the only way.

i like it. 5/5