Very well written, its really good. love it. xxxxxxxxxxxx

This is so sad. It really touched my heart.

Alas
I am all alone in my life
I have no choice now
I wish I would die
I still love her

Hope you start to feel better soon.
Thinking of you
Your friend Cindy

Thats so heartwrenching..
When the person we love leaves us, it's always so hard to carry on. But there's always someone who needs us so we much continue on with life.
Stay strong
5/5
*gem*

You are good at writing sad poems.. I really feel in this poem you describe your feelings very hopeless.. I think it is pretty normal to have this black/white world for a while after breaking up.. And it takes a lot of time and power to fill that empty place in your heart again.

You are good at writing sad poems.. I really feel in this poem you describe your feelings very hopeless.. I think it is pretty normal to have this black/white world for a while after breaking up.. And it takes a lot of time and power to fill that empty place in your heart again.