She didn't feel the same way anymore
And that's where she left him and walked out the door

aaaah, how sad this is. this show the deepest feelings of heart. this how you described the full story of sad love.. i liked your work. and i am ading you in my favourites

Good 5/5 I really liked it.

Wow. That poem was incredibly strong. The emotion pouring out from blood is scary, but so good. I enjoyed the depth, and the way you laid out the poem. This is amazing skill. You ven rhymed, given it something extra. Great write!

a big 5/5!

Omg That was so fu-kn awum! i loved it, woah you are so good!
your words and everything just flowed to perfectly!!!
5/5
-bam

Wow... your poem was so excellent very2 excellent... jee!!! i never read such a poem like thid before... please keep a good work ha.... i will add you now to my favorite... sayonara

WOW! Very effective writing! You're a natural at this =D Keep on writing, it's very good =)

Omg Darien. not only was this really good, but it was really sad.. i hope everything is okay. we havn't had a decent conversation in ages..

naww.. this was really good. your rhyming was great. and i loved the idea on verses. nicely done!!

Natalie``

Wow. Incredible poem. It flowed, it was strong... it was everything that i have looked for in a poem but quite rarely ever find. You have the poets touch that some people dream of having but never will have.

The only abrupt cut in the flow was this:

*First verse told a story of love's once upon a time= THE First verse told a story of love's once upon a time*

Not necessary but it would help.

This is an incredible poem.
I hope you get the weekly poetry contest.

You did a really great job my favorite stanza was
finally he wrote the last verse with the utmost perfection
his poem had taken a twist but he liked the direction
it paralleled his emotions and also made him think
next time he writes he will use blood instead of ink

wow 5/5

Holy shit.
Amazin
like wow.
im so speachless.

Nice ending

To say this poem has a subject I tend to stay away from, I found myself enjoying it quite a bit.
The flow/meter was good, and allowed me to read the lines which I'd normally consider long, fluently.
On the first line I think you meant "realize." And in the fifth stanza I think it should be "cried" to keep it in the same tense as the rest of the poem.
I thought it was a very strong ending.
Thanks for sharing.

This is a wonderful poem ,so full of emotion that I almost felt that I was inside his head, Truly wonderful

I will give this poem 5/5

This is sooo deep...and i can relate...keep up the GREAT work...

Omg
i love you

All I can say is Wow!

Haunting.

plase chack mine out, nowhere [near] as good as this

Loved it

This is an amazing poem. it really makes you think. very well written. keep up the good work.