Comments : The Little Mermaid (Part Two)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Gem what an amazing poem you are weaving. Wonderfully penned and keeps the reader's interest.
    On to part 3
    Great stuff Gem !

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    Great job putting this to verse.

    Take Care Your Friend Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by MEMI

    That is great i like it awwwww

  • 17 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    This is a good long story. i can see you got it from the movie but this is kinda a good version and sounds better. well you misspelled but in the fourth to the last verse its in the last line. Well its good 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Nice Part II to a beautiful fairytale. I can't wait to read the next one!!

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Part II just as good as part one....Great job!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Excellent poem of to read part 3