If I Could

by Jenni Marie   Mar 23, 2007


If I could be with anyone
It would be with you
This feeling is so strong
My love for you is true.

If I could make you grin
It would be worthwhile
Deep down inside I know
That you're without guile.

If I could make you laugh
I'd do it all the time
Do anything at all
Just to make you mine.

If I could soothe away your fears
I'd always hold you tight
Do everything in my power
Just to make things right.

If I could lie in your arms
Forever there I'd stay
Nothing would matter much
As long as you were okay.

If I could somehow help you
I'd always find a way
Do you realize that it is you
Who made my sun shine today?

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  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good. But it was a "basic" love poem and I'm usually pretty picky about love and sad poems. Try adding some similies and metaphors.

  • 17 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Ur poems are amazing. they blow me away. you have such a beautiful way of expressing ur emotions. i am adding you to my favourites!! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Ur poems are amazing. they blow me away. you have such a beautiful way of expressing ur emotions. i am adding you to my favourites!! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    That was a beautiful, loving poem. However, I felt that it was just too simple. Your vocab usage was rather limited, and I feel you could have expressed your emotions in more depth.

    It was still a pleasure to read, though. It's always good to read a nice love poem. :) 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelli

    OMG! THIS IS SOOOO GOOD!

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