Awwwww tear jerking, thats ever so good well done xxxxxxxxx

I thought it was very moving and well written. It speaks to anyone(everyone) who has ever felt that kind of pain.

Jeannie
What a sad and heart touching write.

A comforting
That gives you peace
Inside your soul that died
Blanketing
The brokenness
With each new tear you cry.

Loved the word chocies you have used.
Excellent!
Take Care Your friend Cindy

What a very heart touching write Jeannie.

A comforting
That gives you peace
Inside your soul that died
Blanketing
The brokenness
With each new tear you cry.
^^^
My favorite part.
Need I tell you what an amazing poetess you are ..... nope cause your writing proves your amazing talent
Touching read Auntie!

Even now I still have that little girl inside. You are so gifted. Great write...5/5

This was so sad and nicely written.
Great job.

Awh, well done.
It was written s beautifully.
I liked how the poem was set up
different but still flowed well
good job.

Absolutely fantastic...

I love this poem...
Nice work!!
<3

Wow i reallly liked that one it got to me...well donexxx

Very touching and can relate to alot of people. very beautiful

'From you sadden eyes' - you should be your.

Very sad. It made me want to cry.
It reminded me of a song called 'Little Girl' I forget who sings it though. :/
But, it was a great poem.
Just about perfect. :]

Aweh that was sad, and what's even sadder about it is that this is the reality of many young childrens' lives, society has become so messed up and it's horrid..but you wrote this magnificently, I don't even know what else to write because nothing I do will give this what it truly deserves.

I love it so much ive read it alot and it still makes me cry