by BeautifulDisaster Mar 23, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Are you happy now? |
by Vanessa
I like the last part the best. The story is amazing and the emtions are strong. Once Again I love this poem, it was one of your better ones 5/5 |
I didnt mid this poem but I think that I liked some of the other poems better. In the beginning the poem started off very strong and the repeating line was beautiful however half way into the line it just got sort of annoying. I really liked however that you decided against making it rhyme, this move made it more poetic and a lot better flow.. overall nice job. |
by Kaila
Your words werne't that strong and neither was the motion for me. I didn't really feel the pain... |
I love your poems, maybe its because they remind me of myself, almost every single word makes me look inside myself and its me in your words, your poetry reminds me of mine |
by Boy
Are you happy now? |