Wow. so you're saying that you didnt want what you wanted about what he told you?

Aww...hope that wasn't inspired by truth...though it would make the poem better...hmm...confused...haha. Neah..it's not nice to see people hurt..oh and nice poem :)

I love it, reminds me of how I feel,
wanting to know the truth,
but hurting like hell when I have found it,
I love this part,

I let my mind wander
Thinking this was all real,
Opening my heart to wounds
That will never heal.

I have opened myself and I fear that my
mental wounds might never fade, wonderful poem.

Very nicely written.

Josie

Good poem.
It flowed well and the emotion was shown.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]