Sayonara

Well as much i am angry or somthing , i would not say those words, becasue i can not accept that fact

I was really skeptical about the heading and after reading the whole poem I could figure out what you were talking about. Its great 5/5 from me. Just correct the spelling mistake throw/trow

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Fsams

It was good it had a good some good rhymes

It was interesting i dont mean to be a critic but put more depth into it 4/5

This is a good poem, you have a good talent here so keep writing. take kare xxxxx