Well, I have to say this has to be yet another amazing poem that I have ever read!!!
AHAHAHAH
I think this is one of our better ones together, and to say you kept aiming for sad and I kept turning to dark, I think it turned out pretty damn good!!

Again you girls have written an awesome piece.... dark, scary and a fear that many have.... it flows and rhymes well. Well done once again. It's a pleasure to have both of you in our group.