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by DeadGirl AKA Becka Mar 23, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / dark, horror
Walking down an alley way I hear a slight humming it brings me to delay... It's deep and yet beautiful... I follow it closer... It's o so desirable... Turning a sharp corner, Thats darker than before... The humming grows louder as I walk across the dirt floor... Bricks built around me start moving in... as I walk farther... My world starts to spin... I turn fast, Back behind me... I see you standing there... smiling with glee... I'm now trapped... within your grasp... Theres no way out... I feel myself gasp... You walk close to me... and breath down my neck... You kiss it softly... it's like a soft peck... All I do is... all I do is stare... Why isn't my body moving?... Does it just not care?... A soft tone kiss... turns into a braul... My mind is fighing yes... But my body does nothing at all... You have your way, with me that night... You leave me lying there... You leave my sight... I lay there in shock, tears running too... why would this happen?... What I do to you?... It's all over now... my question is why? why did this happen?... why oh why...
by Nix
Very unique and interesting poem. Rhythm of this piece is very haunting and you created excellent atmosphere. Imagery is superb too. Very effective poem, it deserves 5/5 (emotions are also greatly expressed)
by aisyned
I like it.. its a great poem hun.